- Wine and related pages require some work. There seems to be a lot of duplication, as well as confusion about varietals and brands. Furthermore, the issues are muddied by the fact that the terminology in the US differs from that in the rest of the world. - Burschik, 09:23, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC). Have started to make some heaadway on this as I add German wine comprehensively. There are a lot of things missing and a lot of reorganisation needed. Please start commenting on Talk:Wine Justinc 13:34, 5 Oct 2004 (UTC)
- Food is mostly a list of lists. ~ Jake 23:58, 24 Dec 2003 (UTC).
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- I have started work on improving the food entry. Any suggestions / comments / ideas welcomed at Talk:Food. Thanks David Thrale 23:18, 8 Mar 2004 (UTC)
- Apple Jacks -- Go to the external link at the bottom and use it as a reference tool for why the green jacks became X-shaped. 66.32.156.73 00:56, 16 May 2004 (UTC)
- The section of chocolate on "the economics behind chocolate definition" has some useful information, but seems to me to have a POV problem. Also it needs grammar corrections. --Dominus 19:17, 22 Jul 2004 (UTC)
- Soup- article of the week did a lot of work, but the History section is short and the Western and Non-Western sections have no text in them.--Alsocal 04:42, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)
- Pumpkin - is much better now; it just needs some organization to flow better from paragraph to paragraph ike9898 21:09, Dec 1, 2004 (UTC)
- I have tried to organise the article into more sensible paragraphs, and tried to improve the overall "flow". - Sjc196 12:06, 2 Dec 2004 (UTC)
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