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Everyone references is referred to in the text. Every references is a referred article or scholarly volume. Dennisraphael (talk) 13:17, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Refereed

Refereed scholarly articles are not unreliable sources. Wikipedia on the other hand is.

This article is starting to smell like it is the summary of your research papers. That is not what Wikipedia is for. http://en.Wikibooks.org or http://en.wikisource.org or http://en.wikiversity.org may be a more appropriate target of your efforts. Deet (talk) 02:59, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

I'm new to wikipedia and I'm not sure how to include this, but a great introduction to the Social Determinants of Health is the WHO Europe pdf the Solidfacts. It's very accessible and outlines what is know so far academically with reference to key articles and policy implications. www.euro.who.int/document/e81384.pdf —Preceding unsigned comment added by TakverRemedios (talk • contribs) 21:59, 28 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] References

There are several issues with the references:

Self-cited references
No inline citations
So many citations that nobody can possibly match with the content (and who can tell if they are all used or whether there is linkspam?)

As a starting point, and in order to protect your additions, I strongly suggest that you employ Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Inline_citations or someone will eventually cull this article as has happened previously. Deet (talk) 14:43, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Breaking it down

I think this page can be eventually broken down into various pages. I wonder if it should focus on just the basics of the SDOH, and give examples, and remove/reduce the theoretical sections? BoomerAB (talk) 03:01, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

Could include specific condition. Have started a page called Social determinants of obesity aswell as List of preventable causes of death. Would start a public health task force if people are interested.--Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 20:25, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

I would definitely be interested. BoomerAB (talk) 14:03, 16 April 2009 (UTC)