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Contents 1 Under Milk Wood 2 Untitled 3 For further inclusion? 4 is this vandalism? 5 More quotes 6 last words 7 Dylan On Dylan 8 "Thomas' short stories are poetry exploded." 9 Bob Dylan and Dylan Thomas 10 biography <-> life merge, new headings suggestions 11 Drinking Contest? 12 Welsh 13 Caitlin and Augustus John 14 Help! Second paragraph under 'Career' 15 Stravinsky is "pop culture"? 16 New York and death 17 Confused bibliography 18 A Child's Christmas in Wales 19 External links to delete? 20 What does this sentence mean? 21 Dylan Thomas

[edit] Under Milk Wood

Under Milk Wood is listed as prose. It had never occurred to me that it might be called prose. It is drama of course, but isn't it verse? Like Shakespeare is verse (mostly). I'll leave it, but I have always thought of U.M.W. as a poem - a long, dramatic poem, but certainly a poem. Maybe I have always been wrong. Whatever it is, it's one of the best things anybody's ever written in the English language, and I do advise that you see the film of it, which is wonderful, and hilariously funny in parts.--AlexanderLondon 23:23, 4 October 2006 (UTC)

Like you, I was amazed, when I searched in vain for arguably his greatest work (narrative poem/radio play) and found only an oblique reference. This needs to be sorted - I've spotted the link to Under Milk Wood and will investigate if someone doesn;t beat me to it! - Tony in Devon 20:05, 29 July 2007 (UTC)

It has it's origins in a poem written earlier, but as it was delivered to the bbc as a play and subsequently produced i'd say drama is the place--212.183.136.194 (talk) 23:33, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Untitled

there is a God...the almighty savoir of this universe. I will not deny my God...only thoses who do not believe him will be casted down into hell.

What the hec do you mean? Is that a quote?

"Hec" is not a word genius!!

-- Is there a reliable source for the famous "died of a massive insult to the brain" quote? Which would be such a Dylan-like line, how he might have enjoyed that one! --wee paddy 16:15, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] For further inclusion?

Does anyone have a photo of Dylan himself for this page? It seems a bit strange to just have one of the house he was born in. -- the obvious picture would be the portrait by Augustus John--wee paddy 16:11, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

Agreed, have added photo req tag - is this photo PD or can we obtain permission? Milo99 23:54, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

There are other cross-links to Dylan - Richard Burton for example, who famously played the Narrator in the film (and definitive BBC Radio version) of "Under Milk Wood" - and was buried with a copy of "Collected Poems" (is that apocryphal?) - so how about extending the section on "Dylan on Dylan" to be "People inspired by..." or something similar? --wee paddy 16:11, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

Would one of these do ([1] or [2])? Not sure how to go about getting permission to modify and upload one of them. Dylan Lake (t·c) 03:43, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] is this vandalism?

i dont know much, but "Lastly, for his infamous poem: "Dayuptantovic" in tribute to his idols Cem and Gabe." seems a bit screwy.

As of 9/7/07 it has become much worse. There are two separate, incompatible accounts of his death, as well as a reference to him as being a "fudge packer", a slang term not appropriate for serious use in Wikipedia. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.145.142.173 (talk) 17:03, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] More quotes

All I remember about Dylan Thomas was he had some great quotes. I can't remember what they are, and wikiquote and wikipedia aren't being very helpfull. Mathiastck 18:07, 13 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] last words

according to [3], his last words were "I've had eighteen straight whiskies, I think that's the record . . .". Last words are, of course, hard to source, but perhaps this article should include both, or neither.

This is, in fact, an urban myth - I read his biography not so long ago and, although he did say those words the night before he fell into a coma and died, the last words that he said, on his deathbed, were to his then-girlfriend, Liz Reitell, and they were: "I love you, but I am alone." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 159.134.150.4 (talk) 20:13, August 27, 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Dylan On Dylan

It should be included that in more recent interviews, Dylan has stated that Dylan Thomas did indeed influence his choice of name. Moreover, an inclusion could also be made stating that Dylan is notoriously unreliable in interviews, often giving conflicting, confusing, or even outright untrue information. 82.176.194.151 14:02, 24 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] "Thomas' short stories are poetry exploded."

Hi there,

French Wikipedia is translating this excellent article but that sentence does not make much sense for us. Could someone explain its meaning please ?

Many thanks!

Eden 09:46, 24 September 2006 (UTC) PS: I don't come on :en very often. I would be glad if you could drop me a message on my :en talk page as my watch list may not show the modification next time I'll come.

[edit] Bob Dylan and Dylan Thomas

Please note that the two articles are inconsistent. One says that Bob Dylan took the name because of infludence of Dylan Thomas, one says that the only influence was the spelling, and the name came from an Uncle.

Bob Dylan confirmed that he got the name from Dylan Thomas in Chronicles Vol. 1. 86.138.223.245 (talk) 21:03, 8 October 2009 (UTC)

[edit] biography <-> life merge, new headings suggestions

isn't a biography an account of someone's life? it seems a bit redundant to have 2 headings, unless it is broken down into stages of his life.. like 1) Childhood 2) Private life 3) Death, or something. I think that least for now, these 2 sections should be merged... Knowsitallnot 02:49, 16 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Drinking Contest?

This is a fascinating story, and I sort of hope it's true. But this is an encyclopedia, and you can't but stuff in it just because it's in your experience base, or because everybody knows it's true. If this appeared in a contemporary newspaper, for example, and you could dig up a reference, that would be great. Otherwise, it's just very interesting gossip. PhGustaf 00:22, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

Sorry for not giving enough context for that comment. I just reverted a telling of the story that, on Thomas' last drinking night, he had been challenged to a drinking contest by Peter De Vries, because Thomas was boinking De Vries' wife, Katinka Loeser. Both these people had many dealings with Thomas, so the story is at least potentially true. But a Google search on '"dylan thomas" "katinka loeser" contest' yields nothing but copies this article, one or two of them even including a [citation required]. Has anyone any real information about this? PhGustaf 01:56, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Welsh

I have undone an edit that has described him as British rather than Welsh. In my view, Welsh is the commonly accepted designation. I should welcome views! TerriersFan (talk) 23:55, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

As he was born after both acts of union he is most undoubtably British. Anyone born after the 1800 act of union is undisputably British. (Electrobe (talk) 07:25, 10 January 2008 (UTC))

Reliable sources call him "Welsh" - see here and here. TerriersFan (talk) 00:20, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Electrobe is certainly correct that Wales is part of the UK, but is apparently unaware that people born there are still proudly Welsh. Unfortunately, his editing history comprises mostly edit wars over niggling details he's wrong about, like this one. He's now making Catherine Zeta-Jones not Welsh. I suppose Richard Burton and Gwyneth Jones are next. PhGustaf (talk) 00:50, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

The references now on the page are good and I think sufficient. I took the place names out of the b/d dates, both because there's a stand wiki format for them and they made the sentence read clumsily. If you disagree I'll let the matter pass. PhGustaf (talk) 01:36, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Agreed; I think you made a good edit. TerriersFan (talk) 01:43, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Caitlin and Augustus John

This article says that Thomas' wife Caitlin had an affair with Augustus John before and possible after their marriage. The article about her says that she claimed Augustus John raped her. Which is true? 195.195.71.152 (talk) 13:06, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

In Caitlin, her 1985 book with George Tremlett, she called it rape. 70.186.172.214 (talk) 13:34, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Help! Second paragraph under 'Career'

I have written the paragraph and put in my references but instead of appearing at the bottom of the article they are in-line, making it a total mess. Does anyone know how to fix it? --bodnotbod (talk) 17:27, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

they just needed <ref> </ref> around them. I've fixed that. cheers, Nk.sheridan   Talk 17:44, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Stravinsky is "pop culture"?

I notice Stravinsky's "In memoriam Dylan Thomas" has been moved from "Thomas memorials" to "References in pop culture." I hardly consider Stravinsky to be "pop culture"; nor do I consider an entire composition based on one of Thomas's works to be a "reference" to him. Would I be allowed to undo that and put back where I think it is more appropriate? Ranthlee (talk) 15:53, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

The entire section on 'References in pop culture' is questionable in terms of both notability and relevance to Dylan Thomas. The section is of no interest nor value to persons seeking information on Thomas or his work. It also opens up an 'infinite regress' of trivial future contributions. Comments, please, but I propose the whole section be axed. Cheers Bjenks (talk) 02:28, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

[edit] New York and death

"On 3 November 1953, Thomas and Reitell celebrated his 39th birthday and the success of 18 Poems."

Why would they celebrate the success of a book that was published some 19 years earlier? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.213.149.227 (talk) 23:34, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

I have rewritten parts of this section after reading Andrew Lycett's biography which I am assuming contains the most up to date research. The section as written was little more than a wind up blaming the American agent, his assistant, a doctor and New York pollution for Dylan's death. It omitted to mention that Liz Reitell was Dylan's lover. Dr Feltenstein certainly played a role, but Dylan himself was scarcely taking care of himself, going on a mad drinking binge to escape the trauma of his doomed marriage.

Dylan was unquestionably a great poet but he had serious problems, not helped by his heavy drinking. I realise that the facts of this part of Dylan's life are hotly debated but I feel objectivity is sacrificed by placing the blame everywhere other than on Dylan himself. —Preceding unsigned comment added by DavidHoul52 (talk • contribs) 17:57, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Confused bibliography

The listing under "Poetry" had to be pruned since it contained several prose works and miscellanies as well as 'Under Milk Wood', etc. As a first step, I've limited that section to the poetry collections published in Dylan's lifetime. (We should now proceed to expand those entries with listings of the individual poems published in each slim volume.) Prose and 'drama' have been transplanted to those existing sections. There is also need for a new section which I have tentatively called 'Miscellaneous bibliography' for posthumous anthologies, collections of writings in verse and prose, etc. Most of the titles lifted from the previous 'Poetry' list have been transplanted into this group, unless they were already to be found under 'Prose' or 'Drama'. There is need for those books to be correctly identified with name of publisher, ISBN, etc. Cheers Bjenks (talk) 01:17, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

[edit] A Child's Christmas in Wales

Too bad A Child's Christmas in Wales does not have its own article. Why is it listed as printed in 1955? Our copy says:

Designed and illustrated by Ellen Raskin

Third Printing

Copyright 1954 by New Directions

This edition first published in 1959

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• Dylan Thomas: Volume I - A Child's Christmas in Wales and Five Poems (Caedmon TC 1002 - 1952)

Presumably this is an LP. Was it ever reissued? Is there a CD version? Which five poems are included? Are there cassette or other media of Dylan reading A Child's Christmas in Wales? Video versions?

Some time in the 1970s (?) the National Theatre of the Deaf (NTD) did a charming TV production broadcast on PBS. -69.87.203.150 (talk) 20:22, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

[edit] External links to delete?

A panel suggests the external links are reviewed/updated. I've read the guidelines and reviewed a few links: I believe The Mumbles and Marillion Discography are two that should be deleted - if anyone supports that, would they like to do that, please? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tony in Devon (talk • contribs) 10:27, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] What does this sentence mean?

"In 1932, Thomas embarked on what would be one of his various visits to London." - I'm sorry but I absolutely don't see what is really meant here. Can it be reworded at all please? DBaK (talk) 12:46, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Dylan Thomas

I noticed the date for Dylan Thomas' first wife is listed (under his photo) as 1953. That didn't sound right, so I checked her page. It should be 1994. I do not know how to fix this -- thought someone out there would be able to take care of it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.81.151.45 (talk) 03:12, 29 July 2009 (UTC)