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[edit] DeBeers NPOV problemThe first sentence of the paragraph on debeers initially read (emphasis mine):
It was recently modified to read:
The latter of these is clearly a biased wording. The former may or may not be biased (depending on if it's true or not), but definitely needs sources. I've taken both out for now. The bigger question: Do we even need a whole paragraph on DeBeers' activities in the middle of this article? Isn't the DeBeers article enough?
'De Beers announces that its diamonds will henceforth carry a guarantee' Guaranteed by whom? DeBeers? :-) 218.111.169.45 16:35, 3 January 2006 (UTC)Raydar More the point of view issue, where's any actual relevance to the meaning and definition of cartel? Whether or not deBeers is a cartel has nothing to do with the whole blood diamond issue. 81.19.57.130 18:19, 18 January 2006 (UTC) Anne Wolfe DeBeers is a singular company. They, alone do not establish a cartel, but form a monopoly (single seller) of sorts. Whether or not it is NPOV is irrelevant, and should be discussed in either the Monopoly article or the DeBeers article I just want to quickly add this: Cartels in nature are a bad thing. So, to get rid of the lack of neutrality, get rid of every exempt example: DeBeers is not exactly a good example, because the companies who sell the diamonds are not the people who control them, exactly. While DeBeers does have a...not so clean history, one could call those statements Slander. The mention of a monopoly, however, does focus on the right material. If DeBeers was a cartel, People's, and many other Diamond-available stores would be considered cartels. Instead of naming DeBeers, make mention of how Diamond-available stores are forced to do business with the Diamond cartel, which we all know exists. This way, it's not biased, NPOV, or slanted from the neutral territory. 74.12.8.44 13:58, 25 April 2007 (UTC) Joe Caron [edit] Introduction: editorializing by examplesThe introduction currently reads:
By placing the bolded comments side-by-side, the author is clearly inviting the reader to draw conclusions as to what companies abuse monopolies. Although Microsoft and AT&T might well abuse monopolies, this statement would belong, if anywhere, in the articles on Microsoft, AT&T and Monopoly. The addition of the examples does not in fact add anything to the paragraph, as the point is clearly stated in the first sentence. I've removed the second sentence. Asbestos (not signed in) 13:33, 12 October 2006 (UTC) [edit] Attention! Fake information!Re: "== Origin == The name is derived from Edmund Cartel and Georges Cartel. They were successful businessmen in the grain industry in Rennes, before moving to Paris. There they encouraged firms to work together to raise prices. They then left France and went to New York and Chicago, fixing the prices of pork and railway materials. The concept was then legislated against. (Ref: [2] = http://ehg.org.uk/edric1.html" Recommendation: Don't believe this lousy website again! The Archives of Rennes – I contacted – couldn’t verify these persons named ‘Cartel’ (Rennes was their home town!). Another example: the Bavarian village 'asphalt' does not exit. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Muniham (talk • contribs) 06:30, 3 November 2009 (UTC) Categories: Stub-Class WikiProject Business articles | Low-priority WikiProject Business articles | Automatically assessed Business articles | Stub-Class Economics articles | Low-priority Economics articles | WikiProject Economics articles | Stub-Class, Low-priority Economics articles | Stub-Class Finance articles | Low-importance Finance articles | Automatically assessed Finance articles | WikiProject Finance articles | Stub-Class Investment articles | Low-importance Investment articles | WikiProject Investment articles | Wikipedia requested photographs of business & economic topics | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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